Early feedback

Today we were pitching our ideas to our media class. I told my class about the first two ideas as I like them more than the third one. After pitching, I asked them about their opinion on my ideas and any suggestions on how I can improve them. Here is the video of feedback that I received:

The main points are:
(first idea)

• To connect somehow all three elements as they have to have a link. For example by using the same colour
• Maybe do something with drums
• Think about filming at night as it can be tricky

(second idea)

• To include more locations of happy future to the second video and make these look very romantic 
• Maybe include a clue, in the end, so the audience can understand that these have not happened yet.  For example that after singing the artist comes up to a girl and asks her phone number.
• To make an idea either very romantic and cheesy or play around more and include more extraordinary details

Overall, I am very pleased that my class liked the both songs I have chose. However, I understood that there are many things which I have to think about. For now, I think that the second idea is more successful as the narrative part connects it all together and makes it more interesting to watch. I think I will need to develop it more by adding more details into it. I will probably leave it as an ordinary love story as it was my main idea from the beginning.