Feedback on our first treatment: overview

Today we have received a feedback on our treatment. We divided our group into two subgroups so that when half of the group was pitching the idea, the other one would make notes. For that lesson, we made a presentation on Prezi and also printed out all the pictures so that our idea would be more visual.
The presentation that we created was liked by the audience we presented. The song was also approved, however, we were said that some ideas we had, for example, fish, is not going well with the song so we have to think more about matching sound and picture. The main idea of minimalistic presentation and the idea of two main colours white and red was also liked and said to be very interesting, however, we understood that that should be a theme that will connect all elements not just colours. The second element that we have got (dancers) was criticised as it may not be well planned yet. We were said that the music may not fit the dance we were thinking about. Also, it may be hard to find a good choreographer for us. The bulb element in this scene was said to be very interesting, however, we should think more about the feedback we got one more interesting idea for this element: to increase the brightness of light through the video so that in the end dancers become silhouettes. The third element was the most criticised as we have not planned it thoroughly yet. At that time we had just bunch of ideas that were similar in colour. The fish idea was declined as it is forbidden to hurt and especially kill fish. So the main target for our group after that pitch became finding the whole idea and therefore a third element that would link everything together.
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Now, we are processing all the information that we received in order to improve our idea.