Feedback on our first treatment: target achievement 2

The other task I had was to think about third element in our video which would link everything up. The firs idea I came to was to show the artist in a bed with white sheets and then to show her in the same bed but with red sheets. That would link the colour theme and also would give more opportunities for lip-syncing. The idea was to show to emotions: loneliness and passion. So that when she would lie in white bed she would struggle and be unhappy, but in the red bed she would be with a man. However, we then thought with my group that coloured beds would look similar to sofas and the idea won't look interesting.


However the concept was liked and we decided just to change it a little bit. Instead of the bed we decided to put artist on the floor which is lighted up with either red or white lights. This would look more interesting and there will be more space to play around as artist could dance on the floor.
For now, we just understand that it may be hard to find a man which can lie down with the artist so it may make the search of cast much more difficult.